Friday, April 16, 2010

Story

I'm writing a story. so far I have 2 pages!! The book is coming along really well. Actually, so well, I want to show you some of it:
Drip, drip, drip. That's the sound that Lilly heard first thing in the morning. She was awaken by this noise. Though it was a normal sound, maybe a sink leak or even the water dripping from her last nights shower. The noise frightened her. Lilly hoped right out of her bed and ran to her brothers room. As she tip toed through his mess on the floor, and had to suffer little prickles on her foot from mysterious items. She managed to pass to the other side of the room, and stand right by his bed. She shook her brother, "Jake" she whispered. He didn't wake up. Suddenly, the dripping noise grew louder. Lilly shook Jake even harder. Then, Jake jumped out of his covers. "WHAT?!!!!!!!!!!!" He yelled, he looked around untill he saw his 5 year old sister standing before him. Jake pulled his cover over his head and told her to leave. Lilly jumped up on his bed, still scared,"No. I heard a scary noise" Jake didn't answer. Lilly scooted closer to him, "get off, and get out," He mumbled. But Lilly was to scared, she scooted even closer and layed down. Very slowly, Lilly tried to sneak under Jake's covers.

Hope you liked it!!! (I have more, that was just a sneak peak)

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